5 February 2012, 5:45 am
I have been writing this story for a while now and I have only just realised I need a name for it. Description: This story is set in the 1980's and takes place in New York. The main characters names are Frankie and Johnny, they are both small time criminals but get a call from from a powerful gang leader about a job he needs them to do. They are hired to harpoon a man named Richmond who is staying in a hotel room at the Bentley Hotel (the name of a real hotel in New York) They harpoon him from the top of a crane but Mr Green, the man they are hired by, betrays them by tipping the crane into the side of the hotel killing hundreds. Johnny (the Main character) wakes up around the corner from the accident with only a few scratches after he hit the building. He is confused how this happened but has to forget about it quickly as he is soon down the hospital everyday visiting Frankie who had near fatal injuries. The rest of the story involved Johnny chasing Mr Green around America but is having trouble as the relative of someone who dided in the crane accident also seeks revenge but things it is all down to Johnny. Eventually Johnny meets a woman with special abilities who saved him from the building and together they face Mr Green in the final show down. The woman gets shot and killed and later that day Frankie dies in his hospital bed. Johnny is left scarred and never fully recovers. I know the story seems to be a bit down at the end but i have got tired of books that always end happily. so what do you think and what do you think the title should be?... Read More »
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