31 July 2010, 3:15 pm
(Sorry about it being st up oddly and all, it's not working.) Would you continue reading this even though it's not much? It kind of just came to me and I wrote it down. I'm not even sure what this stoy is about or who the character is...soo can you give me some suggestions? Should I make it mytological or real or something interesting? Thank you! =] Night was upon us so suddenly, I was unsure if it had been day at all. The brazen trees were standing stiff while the wildflowers drifted simutaneously to the wind's commands. I took off in a sprint, gaining speed across the plains. I cloed my eyes for just a second until I heard the slight drumming of hooves surrounding me. I raced alongside the tracking gazelles until I reached my destination. There, in the distance was my hill along with my peace. It looked no different than all the other places around here- covered in greenery, but to me it was different; to me it was special. I darted up the hill and felt my hair whipping through the breeze from behind. Once I reached the top, I I fell back in the grass, feeling the moist dew of the day's earlier cloud burst on my back and neck. The grass wasn't overgrown, but high enough to hide the proof of my existence on the hilltop. I moved my arms and legs through the grass, caressing it. My mind and heart caught the sensation of traquility and I breathed in deeply, allowing my tense muscles to relax. I gazed up at the stars. Sirius was shining brighter than ever, standing out from all the other stars. I then knew, tomorrow was the day.... Read More »
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